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Sunday, December 14, 2008

I Knew Instantly

Every hope he offered
and the world spun
crazily.

Lips and hands and
caresses that
took breath away.

For a day, forever
for a moment
for this instant.

~
For the prompt at Sunday Scriblings.

9 comments:

Tumblewords: said...

Ah, yes, for this instant! Nice work!

BJ Roan said...

Nice poem!

Simplicity said...

Oh I love this!

It flows so beautifully!

gel said...

Yum! nice

babbler said...

This reminds me of the night I met my husband!

Winnie the poohi said...

Ah! lovely.. romance in the air :D

Patois said...

Something I am totally grateful to be able to relate to. Lovely.

Tammy said...

That's amore! Lovely!

P.S. Then they hog the remote and leave the seat up. LOL

Jyoti said...

Nice Work, Laura !

Thanks for visiting my blog. Hope to see you more often in the blogosphere ;-)